Hi! This is my comic, Hollow Hill. It's about three kids who find out the hill behind their school is hollow and full of very old, very polite monsters. It's black and white with screentones, I draw it in Manga Studio and post twice a week on Smack Jeeves.
hollowhill.smackjeeves.com
Crit welcome, especially on the paneling!
Your blacks are really confident for screentone work. Page 6 is a little crowded, five panels plus all that dialogue. Maybe split it?
You're right, I'll try to keep it to four panels max.
This is one of my favourite comics, just saying.
Chapter 4 starts tonight! New cover page, and I'm finally doing a colour page for the chapter opener.
THE COLOUR PAGE. It's so pretty! What brushes did you use?
Mostly the default airbrush on low opacity plus a watercolour texture overlay. I'll do a little walkthrough in Art & Technique.
The bit with the polite monster offering tea made me laugh out loud at work.
Read the whole thing last night instead of sleeping. No regrets.