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Showcase & Critique: Bakery site, my first 960.gs build

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    • CommentAuthorsarah_m
    • CommentTime5 days ago
     
    A small site for a bakery in my neighborhood. It's my first site on 960.gs (16 column) and I wanted to keep it simple: five pages, a map, and a menu that the owner can edit as a text file.

    http://flourandsalt.example.com.au/

    Feedback welcome, especially on the header. The owner wanted "something warm".
    • CommentAuthorkerning
    • CommentTime5 days ago
     
    Warm achieved. The brown gradient in the header goes a bit muddy in the middle. A lighter stop in the middle might help.
    • CommentAuthorchloe_d
    • CommentTime4 days ago
     
    Love the hand-drawn icons. Opening hours should be on the home page, not three clicks away. That's the only thing people want from a bakery site.
    • CommentAuthorsarah_m
    • CommentTime4 days ago
     
    Ha, the owner said the same thing. Moved hours into the sidebar of every page.
    • CommentAuthorgridlock
    • CommentTime3 days ago
     
    Looks good. One thing: the Google Map loads before the text on slow connections and pushes the page around. Give the map container a fixed height.
    • CommentAuthorsarah_m
    • CommentTime7 hours ago
     
    Fixed height done. Thanks all, the owner's happy and paid me in bread.

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